1st R&RW-season 2

It seems like a thunder has just stroke!
Suddenly high flames light on, as though the ‘Tron was set to fire!
The Phantom makes his way to the ring
wearing a simple wrestling costume
smoke hides the whole ring
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Dr. Louve: Oh it's the Phantom! The Phantom is here!
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Mr. Robotoo: What's he doing here?
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Dr. Louve: You can't seriously have a problem with a wrestler coming out to talk.
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The Phantom grabs a mic and waits for the screamin fans to settle down.
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The Phantom: Ladies and gentlemen of the R&RW Universe, welcome to the new season of R&RW!!!!!!
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The Phantom walks around the ring.
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The Phantom: It's great to be back, great to be here; back where I belong in the middle of this ring entertaining each and every one of you.
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The entire arena cheers on the Phantom while he looks aorund the arena and nods.
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Dr. Louve: The Phantom has got the everyone here on the feet!
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The Phantom: On to what I really came out to say. Last season, a certain wrestler became a title-holder here on R&RW. That same person proceeded to make an open challenge to any person willing to challenge him.
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The Phantom takes a breath and moves the mic closer to his mouth.
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The Phantom: And today, I, the Phantom have come to accept that person's offer.Who is that person you may ask? Well it's none other than Johnny Anderson, the Hardcore Icon Champion of R&RW!!!
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Mr. Robotoo: Who does the Phantom think he is to call out a champion?
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Dr. Louve: Ummm.. a wrestler who deserves a title opportunity?
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The Phantom: So why don't we bring out the champ himself. Johnny?
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After a short wait
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A barrage of shots from a machine gun are heard over the arena bringing a wave of anxiety to the crowd as they begin to cheer
a clip is aired on the titan tron, showing some of his greatest victories and most powerful moves, ranging from his finisher the star cutter to his deadly starsault
Johnny Anderson makes his way to the ring
lots of multicolored pyrotechnics blaze behind johnny anderson as he stands just beyond the entrance stage next to his lover
accompanied to ringside by his manager, the lovely sarah anderson, who is dressed in a lovely black bikini, with the two letters "ja" enscribed on the back of the bottom piece in a bright red color
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Johnny Anderson enters the ring with a mic in hand.
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Dr. Louve: He doesn't look too happy
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Mr. Robotoo: Why should he? This guy wants him to give him a title match for the title he won just the other day.
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Johnny Anderson: Who do you think you are to come here thinking that you are worthy for me to give you a shot at this title?
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Johnny pushes the title further up his shoulder. Glances it then looks at the Phantom.
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Johnny Anderson: You listen to me...
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Phantom: Hold up right there Johnny. Let's just play the clip from not too long ago...
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The camera rolls back to a championship interview were Billie Gene is seen holding a mike to Anderson.
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Johnny Anderson: " Oh wait, I just remembered. I'd like to issue an open challenge to anyone in the back who's interested in challenging for this Hardcore Icon Championship. I'm not a coward, so I want to take on all comers so I can prove once and for all that I am who I say I am, the quintessence of awesome."
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The Phantom stares at Anderson with an eyebrom raised.
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The Phantom: Ring any bells now 'champ'? That is you isn't it? And as I recall you tried to force a title opportunity for yourself out of the gm. All I am asking for is the same chance...
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Anderson clenches his teeth at the Phantom
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Johnny Anderson: You...!!
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Johnny turns around brushing back his hair then turns back facing the Phantom.
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Johhnny Anderson: You know what...fine. Like I said in that interview, I'm no coward and I have no doubt that a pest like you could ever defeat me. Retaining this title is almost guaranteed. So i accept, I'll give you your title match, under one condition...
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Anderson has a big grin across his face.
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Johnny Anderson: If you defeat me in a tag match tonight,I'll give you your shot. But if I win, then this is as close as you'll ever get to this title.
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Johnny leans into the Phantom with his title in his hand.
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The Phantom stares at Anderson and his title...
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The Phantom: I accept!!!
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Dr. Louve: Oh yes!! Anderson vs the Phantom for the Hardcore Icon Championship.
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Mr. Robotoo: He still has to pick-up the tag victory. Don't get delusional.
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The Phantom: Let's just hope you can back up your cockiness, because trust me when I say that I can back up mine.
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The Phantom turns to the audience placing his hand over his mouth then back to Anderson.
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The Phantom: When I'm done with you, believe it. Like all other's before, you WILL, REST IN PEACE!!!
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now thats what i call an RP

Just wanted to edit some of my lines. Some don't quite fit in with my character's personality.





It seems like a thunder has just stroke!
Suddenly high flames light on, as though the ‘Tron was set to fire!
The Phantom makes his way to the ring
wearing a simple wrestling costume
smoke hides the whole ring
-
Dr. Louve: Oh it's the Phantom! The Phantom is here!
-
Mr. Robotoo: What's he doing here?
-
Dr. Louve: You can't seriously have a problem with a wrestler coming out to talk.
-
The Phantom grabs a mic and waits for the screamin fans to settle down.
-
The Phantom: Ladies and gentlemen of the R&RW Universe, welcome to the new season of R&RW!!!!!!
-
The Phantom walks around the ring.
-
The Phantom: It's great to be back, great to be here; back where I belong in the middle of this ring entertaining each and every one of you.
-
The entire arena cheers on the Phantom while he looks aorund the arena and nods.
-
Dr. Louve: The Phantom has got the everyone here on the feet!
-
The Phantom: On to what I really came out to say. Last season, a certain wrestler became a title-holder here on R&RW. That same person proceeded to make an open challenge to any person willing to challenge him.
-
The Phantom takes a breath and moves the mic closer to his mouth.
-
The Phantom: And today, I, the Phantom have come to accept that person's offer.Who is that person you may ask? Well it's none other than Johnny Anderson, the Hardcore Icon Champion of R&RW!!!
-
Mr. Robotoo: Who does the Phantom think he is to call out a champion?
-
Dr. Louve: Ummm.. a wrestler who deserves a title opportunity?
-
The Phantom: So why don't we bring out the champ himself. Johnny?
-
After a short wait
-
A barrage of shots from a machine gun are heard over the arena bringing a wave of anxiety to the crowd as they begin to cheer
a clip is aired on the titan tron, showing some of his greatest victories and most powerful moves, ranging from his finisher the star cutter to his deadly starsault
lots of multicolored pyrotechnics blaze behind johnny anderson as he stands just beyond the entrance stage
Johnny Anderson makes his way to the ring
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Johnny Anderson enters the ring with a mic in hand, smiling.
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Dr. Louve: He doesn't look too happy.
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Mr. Robotoo: Why should he? This guy wants him to give him a title match for the title he won just the other day.
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Johnny Anderson: Look, I know that you think that you're entitled to something, and that you're using my open challenge to get it. I respect that, but...
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Johnny pushes the title further up his shoulder. Glances at it then looks at the Phantom.
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Johnny Anderson: I don't take too kindly to having anyone demand anything from me. So...
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Johnny finally notices that the Phantom is staring off into the crowd, completely ignoring him.
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Johnny Anderson: Listen to me, damn it! You don't ask for me to come out here and ignore me as I'm...
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Phantom: Hold up right there Johnny. Let's just play the clip from not too long ago...
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The camera rolls back to an interview were Billie Gene is seen holding a mic to Anderson.
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Johnny Anderson: "Oh wait, I just remembered. I'd like to issue an open challenge to anyone in the back who's interested in challenging for this Hardcore Icon Championship. I'm not a coward, so I want to take on all comers so I can prove once and for all that I am who I say I am, the quintessence of awesome."

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The Phantom stares at Anderson with an eyebrow raised.
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The Phantom: Ring any bells now 'champ'? That is you, isn't it? And as I recall you tried to force a title opportunity for yourself out of the gm. All I am asking for is the same chance...
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Johnny turns his head up and away from the Phantom, seemingly in disbelief of what he's hearing.
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Johnny Anderson: Really? Let me explain something to you. I didn't try to force anything out of Jared. If you were here before R&RW shut down last time, you'd know that I was scheduled in a championship match for the next pay-per-view that we would have had, but never did. Since my contract stated that I was guaranteed a title shot, and never got it, that clause was still valid. I rest my case. Besides, you couldn't possibly comprehend what I mean. I doubt you even know what quintessence means.
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Johnny runs his hand through his hair, still facing the Phantom.
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Johnny Anderson: You know what? Fine, I'll give you a shot at my championship, as I have no doubts that I can defeat you. But only under one condition, as I need to prove that you're worthy.
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Johnny's face begins to show a scheming smile.
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Johnny Anderson: If you and a partner can defeat someone in the locker room and myself in a tag match tonight, I'll give you your shot. But if I win, then this will be as close as you'll ever get to this title.
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Johnny leans into the Phantom with his title in his hand.
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The Phantom stares at Anderson and his title...
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The Phantom: I accept!!!
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Johnny and the Phantom shake hands. When the exchange is over, Johnny brings his title back to his shoulder. He turns away from the Phantom and exits the ring, heading for the back.
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Dr. Louve: Oh yes!! Anderson vs the Phantom for the Hardcore Icon Championship.
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Mr. Robotoo: He still has to pick-up the tag victory. Don't get delusional.
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The Phantom: But let's just hope you can back up your cockiness, because trust me when I say that I can back up mine.
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The Phantom turns to the audience placing his hand over his mouth then back to Anderson.
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The Phantom: When I'm done with you, believe it. Like all other's before, you WILL, REST IN PEACE!!!





BTW, did you use dark red or brown for Mr. Robotoo?

I used dark red and i had no problems..you and only you really can know our characted so I'm glad you changed it up to fit your character. One edit..i think since is misspelt somewhere in your lines. Other than that i think it looks great